Tension Builds Nicely And Draws The Reader Into The Action

The tension builds nicely and draws the reader into the action. The only thing that annoyed me is Lewis’ extreme crybaby routine. I found myself wishing that Uncle Jonathan would tell Lewis to stop being such a wuss and stand up for himself. Rose Rita does effectively stand up for herself, and the contrast between her and wussy Lewis is striking.
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